First beginnings of a story, thoughts?

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As an Australian who doesn't understand how some people make their political stance their entire identity, this is actually terrible. "A bit of political back and forth" is 90% of the story, and any decent description is constantly interrupted by the mention of words like "liberal", "snowflake", "Trump", or "Conservative".

I mean, if this is your (or anyone else's) jam, don't let me get in the way. But no.
 
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