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You do a good job describing huge tits! Which is the most important part.
Personally I don't find it sexy when characters spend so much time opining about "those dang woke kids these days". Makes me feel like I'm reading Jeff Foxworthy's smut, which isn't really a turn-on. But maybe that's just me idk..
Personally I don't find it sexy when characters spend so much time opining about "those dang woke kids these days". Makes me feel like I'm reading Jeff Foxworthy's smut, which isn't really a turn-on. But maybe that's just me idk..
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I work all day with old, Fox News obsessed dudes. Culture wars wasn’t the intention, just trying to describe a type of person. If it’s distracting I can remove.
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That's... a bit underwhelming.
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That said: sorry you felt the need to remove the story.
Note to author:
- if there is constructive criticism about your work... style, grammar, spelling, formatting, composition... consider it carefully and see if it is something you could improve.
- if there are comments about tastes and preferences... ignore them. It is impossible to cater to all tastes, and what one person likes, another will hate.
That said: sorry you felt the need to remove the story.
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Sorry - honestly I couldn’t figure out how to delete post as I wanted to repost with some edits and all in one post. I have reposted in this thread if you care to see
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